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Fallin' Down by ~Tamuril-Marie:iconTamuril-Marie:

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I'm suppose to be strong
I'm suppose to carry on
So I can hold your hand
Maybe I'll understand

I'm suppose to know
What is needed to be known
So when you've fallen down
I can lift you off the ground

I'm suppose to save you all
But what happens when I fall?
I'm suppose to be your gaurdian angel
But heavens taken back my wings
And broke me into a hell of eternity
I'm suppose to pick you off the ground
But I myself have fallen down

I'm suppose to be your shoulder
Not someone to mend
I'm suppose to be the holder
Not the one to be held

I'm suppose to carry on
Live through my pains
Till they're gone
Act like nothing's wrong with me
Pretend long enough
It'll become reality

I'm suppose to save you all
But what happens when I fall?
I'm suppose to be your gaurdian angel
But heavens taken back my wings
And broke me into a hell of eternity
I'm suppose to pick you off the ground
But I myself have fallen down

So who will the savior be now?
If I can't pick myself off the ground
Cause I'm suppose to save you all
But I can't save myself

So now do we all fall?
©2005-2009 ~Tamuril-Marie
:icontamuril-marie:

Author's Comments

hmmm.....ya it's a poem no suprise huh?

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~itachisgirl Nov 22, 2005, 11:47:37 AM
that was awesome! i loved it! very good

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"Every sadist also has a masochistic side."

I am the very model of a psycho individual...

ITACHI's should be quote!: "i've always wanted to kill the world's sexiest man. But then I realized suicide's not the way to go"
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~itachisgirl Nov 22, 2005, 11:48:15 AM
btw its going in my favourites ^^

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"Every sadist also has a masochistic side."

I am the very model of a psycho individual...

ITACHI's should be quote!: "i've always wanted to kill the world's sexiest man. But then I realized suicide's not the way to go"
:icondiscipled:
~discipled Nov 22, 2005, 12:03:19 PM
awesome... i love it... i relate. :clap:

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x*~You Were My Everything~*x

x*~This came straight from my heart, out of my eyes, down my face, into my hands and onto your computer screen.~*x

x*~I used to try to hide my blemishes, but I've come to realize that they make me nothing less than human
:icontamuril-marie:
~Tamuril-Marie Nov 22, 2005, 12:04:19 PM
thank you

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If you like a piece by an artist, whether poetry, art, photography or so forth, chances are you'll like their other pieces.

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:icondiscipled:
~discipled Nov 22, 2005, 12:09:37 PM
welcs

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x*~You Were My Everything~*x

x*~This came straight from my heart, out of my eyes, down my face, into my hands and onto your computer screen.~*x

x*~I used to try to hide my blemishes, but I've come to realize that they make me nothing less than human
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!juanidibuja Nov 22, 2005, 6:43:14 PM
Hmm... good but,... I think there's an answer somewhere...

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I write, draw, sing, play guitar... I dream of being a renisaunce woman... I can't spell... heh... but I'm only remotely good at a few things...

most of all... KENNY ROCKS!!! I will marry that man... Kenshin that is.
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~BlueNightingale Nov 23, 2005, 5:20:26 PM
A really good poem! I love it!

A lot of typographical and grammatical errors though...

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idieh :bounce:
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~HIM357 Nov 25, 2005, 1:32:06 AM
another great poem! i love it! fav! keep it up! :hug:

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Shadow Thieves!
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