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For Always We Part by ~Tamuril-Marie:iconTamuril-Marie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Song


My heart swarming with hurt
My love swarming with sweetness
Your touch swarming in me
Bringing me sweetly
To my pain

My heart filling with anguish
My love filling with despair
Your touch filling my movements
Bringing despair
Bringing despair

Your touch I feel in this excitement
Overcoming my heart
Though love will bring us fulfillment
Never for us
For always we part
©2008-2009 ~Tamuril-Marie
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Author's Comments

I feel like writing lyrics and singing and whenever i do pretty slow pieces they're this kinda theme

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=katgiraffe Jul 9, 2008, 7:46:27 AM
I love the word 'swarm.'

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~Awoly Jul 9, 2008, 1:06:06 PM
A great peace, as usual! Your writings all ways seem to have a part of you in them...I wish I could write as well as you do!

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~Tamuril-Marie Jul 9, 2008, 5:34:40 PM
thanx

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

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~Tamuril-Marie Jul 9, 2008, 5:34:47 PM
woo!

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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~thegreatmizuti Aug 4, 2008, 8:02:20 AM
i could definetly imagin this being sung
swarming maybe a little over used but thats my only criuge i liked it dispite

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~Tamuril-Marie Aug 4, 2008, 12:27:36 PM
^_^ thank you, haven't heard from you in a while, whats up?

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:w00t: OMG LOOK HERE-YOU MUST LOOK AT POETS! :w00t:
Poets On Deviant
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~thegreatmizuti Aug 9, 2008, 12:04:53 PM
heh university taking all my time, after all i am 20 now alot of things started taking priority over my work however i do like to update ever so oftern lol how about u are u well ?

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The standards of justice of this world, decided against driving ambitions and turbulent emotions of a small handful of people
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~Tamuril-Marie Aug 9, 2008, 11:01:05 PM
yeah i'm decent, starting classes again soon

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:w00t: OMG LOOK HERE-YOU MUST LOOK AT POETS! :w00t:
Poets On Deviant
:iconthegreatmizuti:
~thegreatmizuti Aug 10, 2008, 4:57:05 AM
heh i cant wait to start uni again so much inderpendance i love it lol

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