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If all I could ask of you is just one thing, I'd bring the friendship back, the time, perhaps the sting, the moments ago when I fell in love, because the friendship was real and new, not what we've now fallen into.

If all I could ask of you is just one thing, I'd ask for the caring smile you gave, or at least the words that warmed my heart, the emotion that was there at the start.

If all I could ask of you is just one thing, I'd bring back the time before your emotions changed, before you went off and became something new, the you that my emotions hooked and latched onto. I'd ask for the friendship that made my life work, the one that made my life start over. I'd ask for the want, the lie, the desire, the one that made it alright to cry.

If all I could ask of you is just one thing, I'd ask for true friendship, not this momentary fling
©2008-2009 ~Tamuril-Marie
:icontamuril-marie:

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Oh man more open verse........and I realized......for my friends who read my work.....you don't really need to know my emotions, my depression, anything like that, what you know, is what i post on here....that should be it

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:iconawoly:
What you post on here seems to be your emotions and depression and your heart as well, so it should be all we need to know, but there is still no substitute as to talking to you about it directly, and hearing your thoughts and emotions as they are at that time, and also how they change as the time passes, as well as how they may stay the same. Great writing, though, as usual!

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"Under one condition, no talking!" "Yes!" "Of course!" *plays with swords* "Impressive." *CLINK!!!!!* "No Talking!"................................."Good." [link]
:icontamuril-marie:
yeah my poem is full of emotion, but only a small proportion of it...and thanx

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:iconawoly:
No thanks needs to be given when one speaks the truth.

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"Under one condition, no talking!" "Yes!" "Of course!" *plays with swords* "Impressive." *CLINK!!!!!* "No Talking!"................................."Good." [link]
:iconthegreatmizuti:
and if i could ask for one more thing it would be for u to keep writting such intresting poetry

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The standards of justice of this world, decided against driving ambitions and turbulent emotions of a small handful of people
:icontamuril-marie:
^_^ oh thanks

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:icongrethicgirl:
wow <3

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I know I'm who I am today, because I knew you" For Good - Wicked (the musical)

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