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     Curled to where I can hear my own heart beating, continue to suppress which has been fleeting. Huddled close for my own protection, with reasons unknown for this depression. Lost in myself as I have been before,but never was I to be here once more.
     And I'm hidden behind the opened cage, curled up in fear for more than the lion's rage. I was running in circles, tripping about, but no longer am I willing to figure it out. Hidden in the safe zone, protected by arms, my allies may be on my side, but no, i will not face this, even armed. So, shall i stay in hiding til past this lion starves, or when this lion dies shall i arise, pretending my emotions are unharmed?
©2008-2009 ~Tamuril-Marie
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Author's Comments

yay! i did pretty damn good at making this metaphor work

my dreams = suppressed
lion = financial and love life issues
while the lion is a major obstacle in my life, it'll eventually die
whole poem suppose to be in a colosseum? (thus running around in circles)
colosseum = my life
hiding not so much from the lion as my own depression that i can't escape
and the hiding is from my allies, even though they'd help me through this, even with their help i'd rather not face this problem
protected by arms = i've had anti social moments lately and what seems to save me from people and being touched is wrapping my arms around my head


ooo this poem is so symbolized it could be a dream i had

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:icongothchic2010:
its amazing!

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Maybe if my heart stops beating it wont hurt this much, and never agian will i have to answer to anyone
:icontamuril-marie:
thank you kindly

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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^_^ yay

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Just once in my life, I think It'd be nice...just to lose control just once...

Lose Control - Evanescence

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:w00t: OMG LOOK HERE-YOU MUST LOOK AT POETS! :w00t:
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:icongothchic2010:
^_^

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Maybe if my heart stops beating it wont hurt this much, and never agian will i have to answer to anyone

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